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Friday, February 24, 2012

The Visual Character Arc: Characterization in Picture Books

WELCOME TO DAY 1
BLACK COW BOOK TOUR
 
The Visual Character Arc: Characterization in Picture Books
by Magdalena Ball
 
Normally when writing instructors speak of the 'character arc' they're talking about textual based fiction, but all good books, from novels to children's picture books use characterisation well. So why is characterisation important? There's one key, critical reason and that is because everyone reading your book is going to be a person who will need to relate to and accept (even if temporarily) as real. To achieve good characterisation in a novel you need details, specifics, visual impressions, motion. This can be achieved just as well with images as it can with text. With text, you often need a paragraph to convey a character impression such as the following from my new novel Black Cow:

Her mind knotted with things she couldn’t say out loud, desire for change, fear for James’ health and a growing headache that had begun to work its way around the eyes as she called out, "Are you okay?"
Now look at this image of the the Lorax from the Dr Seuss book of the same name:



Doesn't his expression convey something similar, anger, concern, frustration, a hint of tireness, and maybe a sense of being small, helpless and still in charge to an extent all in one glance? It helps that Dr Seuss supports this amazing image with some cracking text:

He was shortish. And oldish.
And brownish. And mossy.
And he spoke with a voice
that was sharpish and bossy.
An example of powerful characterisation? I'll say. There are classic examples of characterisation here with the antogonist/protagonist relationship strengthened by using the antagonist as contrite narrator trying to make good - a character arc if ever there was. All of this is supported by Dr Seuss's colourful imagery, which has stayed with me from childhood like other characters including those of Maurice Sendak.
 Who, for example, could forget Little Bear and his mother. The care, the very human concern of the mother (and just the tiniest hint of exasperation - after all, mother is busy as all mothers are), and the hat, which mother provided him to keep him warm. Yes, all the elements of characterisation can be conveyed in images, in brief hints of text, using rhyme as Dr Seuss does, personification, onomatopoeia, allusion, imagery, all the poetic techniques are in play, and strengthened by the visual.

So how do you do this in your work? Just stick to the basics. Know your characters, develop them with both explicit and implicit qualities, from the superficial and quirky, to the deep and universal. Show the reader who they are through nuance and action, detail, dialogue and description, just as we might get to know someone we meet at a party for the first time. Let us come to love your picture book characters as we would the characters in a novel and you'll have produced a work that will remain with the reader into adulthood.

Magdalena Ball is the author of the newly released character rich novel Black Cow. Grab a a free mini flip book of the book here: http://www.bewritebooks.com/mb/BlackCow/BlackCow.html
For more information on the book visit: http://magdalenaball.com/wordpress/?page_id=175

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BOOK TOUR SCHEDULE:
Friday, 24 February: Educationtipster
Tuesday, 28 February: Nancy Famolari
Friday, 2nd March: Boychik Lit
Monday, 5 March: Slow and Steady Writers
Tuesday, 6 March: World of Ink Network (radio show)
Thursday, 8 March: The Alliterative Allomorph
Saturday, 10 March: Writers on the Move
Monday, 12 March: WOTM Webinar workshop
Thursday, 15 March: Heidi M. Thomas
Friday, 19 March: The Simplicity Collective
Tuesday, 20 March: The Dark Phantom
Wednesday, 21 March: Do North
Thursday, 26 April: A Book and a Chat radio show

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Sunday, May 1, 2011

Author, Magdalena Ball, Mother's Day Poetry!

Oh Mother

 It’s nearly Mother’s Day, just in case you hadn’t begun giving that a little thought.  Speaking as both mother and daughter, it’s hard to beat something home-made (especially when your recipient is paying the bills!).  If you’re up to it, why not write a little poem for your mother, maybe coupled with a bouquet of flowers, her favourite tea (I like Celestial Seasonings’ Tension Tamer, thanks), and a home-made card.  If you aren’t up to that, the next best thing is someone else’s poetry, and I heartily endorse books of poetry for any gift, especially if you’ve taken a little time to choose something tailored for the occasion.  The magnificent Carolyn Howard-Johnson and I have put together an award winning book of poetry designed just for mothers titled She Wore Emerald Then.  The book has a beautiful colour cover by photographer May Lattanzio and contains thirty poems that reflect on motherhood.  Two sample poems follow, along with a link to me reading the first one.  JR McRae called the book “A book of finely cut gems to hold, admire, let their multi-facets flash their messages to mind, and the fine sharp edges of each plane hold the image indelibly.”  In any case, and however you decide to celebrate your mother, grandmother, or the mother of your children, Happy Mother’s Day! 


Mother’s Bed

In the restless night

when mortality lurks in every shadow

the blanket won’t cover your fear

and morning is a half-forgotten dream

vague and uncertain,

slink into my bed

the pillow holds a mother’s secret

whispered charm

you can sink your head into.



There are no demons here;

no whirlwind of memory and anticipation clouding sleep

only eternal warmth

a shared space

free from the ticking illusion

of time, motion, and change.



Here, where you are always welcome

nothing matters

except this peace

this place

containing every possible now.




in the primeval heat

four billion years

before you opened

one puffy eye

the chemical imbroglio

of our home

shouted your name

from the depths of its seabed



no more miraculous

than the smack of light

against your heaving diaphragm



in the random accident

of your arrival

contingency or collaboration

paternal will or

lucky break

makes no difference



you are life itself

the stunning complexity

of DNA woven

within each cell

culmination of every moment

that gave rise to this one

changing everything

sloppy, sleepy

spontaneous

perfect

your carbon atoms

common as the earth

beneath your first steps

the organised complexity

of your extraordinary

beauty

couldn’t be simpler

as you reach a tentative

hand

towards the future


Magdalena Ball runs The CompulsiveReader. She is the author of the poetry books Repulsion Thrust and Quark Soup, the novel Sleep Before Evening, a nonfiction book The Art of Assessment, and, in collaboration with Carolyn Howard-Johnson, Blooming Red, Cherished Pulse, She Wore Emerald Then, and Imagining the Future. She also runs a radio show, The Compulsive Reader Talks.  Find out more about Magdalena at http://www.magdalenaball.com 

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